Free short story (comments welcome)

Hi All,

As you can see below, I have decided to try something new and offer one of my short stories (well, kinda short, it's 11,000 words...so long short) to anyone who likes fantasy and Twilight Zone type fiction. It's also a little inspirational as well. If you happen to read it, and you want to leave a comment, I would be very grateful for your thoughts! You can comment on this post if you like, as the story goes very far down the page and comments could be missed. Would appreciate any thoughts you might have if you read!

All The Best!